Oktapodi

Oktapodi

-It was a quiet day. There were two Octopuses in a fishtank. They lived together and loved each other. But suddenly, a man with a white shirt took the pink octopus out of the fishtank and left the fish market with the animal. The yellow octopus was very shocked but started to follow them on his car, and while the man was driving, the car had an accident and the two animals fell from it. They were together again and tried to scape from the car but unfortunately the man caught them but he lost the control of the car and fell, while the couple got trapped in the clothes dryers. They were safe for a moment but then a seagull caught the male octopus and the pink one, tired of this, used the clothes dryers to push herself and jumped to rescue him.

This time we had the opportunity to watch more or less four videos and we had to choose wich one we want to write about. I chose the video about Octopuses because I found it funny and cute at the same time. So I had to write a narration about it. This time I tried to use punctuation correctly and a topic sentence. It was difficult to write all the ideas in order but I ejoyed writing this.